"...Because of it, readers ask: What is going to happen next? They will keep reading to find out."
I don't know if I've created enough suspense. If there's anyone reading it please let me know.
BTW, my other short story in the writing.com has got another very brief but positive review today. Happy. =) It's here:
http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1567145-Prince-Vingo-Imperfect-love
Everyday I update my following story:
http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1655035-An-endless-failing-pursuit-temp-title1
Sometimes I go back to the previous chapter and change something too.
67 more days.
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