"...their actions and their beliefs. We develop a sense and understanding of people by what they do and think in the dramatic events of the story."
I see... guess that's why good stories always involve people with difficult situations and strong emotions.
Some more revisions:
http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1655035-An-endless-failing-pursuit-temp-title1
Don't forget my other short story:
http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1567145-Prince-Vingo-Imperfect-love
58 days...
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