"When using characters to present clues, don’t forget body language. Nonverbal signals can communicate much more effectively than words. Ask any two lovers."
So I should describe body language. Cool.
BTW, I've decided to change the opening of the story. The old opening is weak; not interesting at all.
http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1655035-An-endless-failing-pursuit-temp-title1
Don't forget my other short story:
http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1567145-Prince-Vingo-Imperfect-love
66 more days.
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