"For example, try and match this image of a sunrise at sea by Philip Caputo in The Voyage:
A golden shimmer appeared where the horizon was supposed to be, then a red sun pushed up, like the head of some fiery infant bulging out of the gray sea’s womb — water giving birth to its opposite element."
...really? Every page? Ok, I'll take that w/ a grain of salt....
I've done some more revisions.
http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1655035-An-endless-failing-pursuit-temp-title1
Don't forget my other short story:
http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1567145-Prince-Vingo-Imperfect-love
64 days...
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